You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: •thank your friend for the holiday •explain that you left your wallet in their house •give them instructions of how to send it back to you

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Dear Josh, Hope you are doing great. I am writing to say thank you for the beautiful holidays in your home and

also

for my wallet that I left in your house.

Apart from

this

, I liked the arrangement that you made for the whole holidays, drinking wine in the garden with Sushi especially. On the

last

night, when your friends were around, at that time I was sitting on the couch, and suddenly your friend came to dance with her. I put my all belongings on the side table. But somehow, I could not pick my wallet up. I believe

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It may be sitting under that couch or side table. Please let me know once you find it because it includes my driver's license and visa cards, it is hard to manage without them.

Therefore

, I have talked with my friend who works near your city. If you can deliver my wallet to him, I will pick from him.

This

way a lot of time will be saved. I will give his contact details very soon. I appreciate the assistance, Best wishes, Gurjit

Submitted by gurhunjjan47 on Wed Sep 18 2024

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To improve task response, you can elaborate slightly more on your holiday experience. Providing a few more details can create a fuller sense of your gratitude.

coherence cohesion

For coherence and cohesion, make sure to check for minor grammatical mistakes and maintain clear transitions between ideas. For example, the transition from thanking Josh to explaining leaving your wallet could be smoother.

task achievement

You have effectively covered all three bullet points in a well-organized manner.

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Your writing tone is appropriate and friendly, which is suitable for this type of letter.

coherence cohesion

Logical structure is clear, with a smooth flow of ideas within paragraphs.

coherence cohesion

Your opening and closing elements are polite and personal, which contributes positively to the overall coherence.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

184 words

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