You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: •thank your friend for the holiday •explain that you left your wallet in their house •give them instructions of how to send it back to you
Dear Josh,
Hope you are doing great. I am writing to say thank you for the beautiful holidays in your home and
also
for my wallet that I left in your house. Apart from
this
, I liked the arrangement that you made for the whole holidays, drinking wine in the garden with Sushi especially.
On the last
night, when your friends were around, at that time I was sitting on the couch, and suddenly your friend came to dance with her. I put my all belongings on the side table. But somehow, I could not pick my wallet up. I believe,
It may be sitting under that couch or side table.
Please let me know once you find it because it includes my driver's license and visa cards, it is hard to manage without them. Remove the comma
apply
Therefore
, I have talked with my friend who works near your city. If you can deliver my wallet to him, I will pick from him. This
way a lot of time will be saved. I will give his contact details very soon.
I appreciate the assistance,
Best wishes,
GurjitSubmitted by gurhunjjan47 on
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To improve task response, you can elaborate slightly more on your holiday experience. Providing a few more details can create a fuller sense of your gratitude.
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For coherence and cohesion, make sure to check for minor grammatical mistakes and maintain clear transitions between ideas. For example, the transition from thanking Josh to explaining leaving your wallet could be smoother.
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You have effectively covered all three bullet points in a well-organized manner.
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Your writing tone is appropriate and friendly, which is suitable for this type of letter.
coherence cohesion
Logical structure is clear, with a smooth flow of ideas within paragraphs.
coherence cohesion
Your opening and closing elements are polite and personal, which contributes positively to the overall coherence.