Some people think it is better for one single legal system throughout the world. Others say countries should have their own law. Discuss both view and give your opinion
Law
is the foundation of countries
worldwide. Although
many people believe that a single law
system
brings many advantages to all countries
around the world, others argue that each nation
must have its own constitutional practice. This
essay will explain both views and give my personal opinion.
On the one hand, a unified legal rule may have a slight advantage to the societies. However
, it will not be suitable for many nations with their specialities. For instance
, several nations have agreed to legalize LGBT marriage. But, this
regulation
will definitely be inapplicable to Muslim-majority states due to
a mismatch between country and religious rule. Another example, monarch countries
have their own legal system
to choose their leader based on patrilinear lines. If this
monarch system
applies to current democratic nations, there will be a mass protest due to
the nepotism of the president's son who becomes the next leader.
In contrast
, giving freedom to every nation
to choose its own legal rule brings more impact to the societies rather than a single legal system
. Muslim states like Maldives can apply an Islamic law
system
and Catholic countries
like the Vatican can also
have the right to use a Catholic law
practice. Having a different regulation
for every country will be beneficial for multicultural countries
as well. Indonesia, as a multicultural and multi-ethnic nation
, has some special regions that are obligated to practice their own regulation
, which is Aceh for Islamic regulation
, and Yogyakarta for the monarch sultanate legal system
. Giving freedom to choose its own law
will make it easier for Indonesia to adapt to its cultural diversity.
To sum up
, while
many people think that a unified legal system
across the world will bring more valuable impact, I firmly believe that letting each nation
determine its own respective law
will bring more massive and significant advantages to people.Submitted by azkaalazkiya97 on
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