You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: •thank your friend for the holiday •explain that you left your wallet in their house •give them instructions of how to send it back to you
Dear Abhi
I hope
this
letter finds you in good health and spirits. I want to thank you from the bottom of my heart for the amazing holiday that you planned. It was a much-needed break from mundane routine. I really appreciate all the efforts that you put in for this
delightful holiday.
Everything was well planned
and well-executed. I wish I could stay longer and have spent more time with you. Add a hyphen
well-planned
While
I was packing my bags there were mixed emotions and during the process, I forgot my wallet there. On the last
day when we returned back from dinner, I kept it in the drawer next to the bed where I slept. The next day, while
I was leaving, I forgot to collect it from the drawer as I was in a hurry.
My wallet has all the identification documents so it is not advisable to send them by post. My office colleague is coming to your city on the weekend for some official work. It would be great if you could hand over my wallet in person, that would be the safest way.
Thank you buddy for being a warm host. Look forward to meeting you soon and creating more memories.
With Love JKSubmitted by jyotikhera2712 on
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coherence cohesion
Your letter has a logical structure, but you can improve the flow between the reasons/explanations and the main points.
task achievement
While your writing tone is friendly and appropriate, keep an eye on minor errors such as missing articles or misplaced phrases to enhance clarity.
task achievement
You expressed gratitude and detailed your experience, fulfilling the task requirements comprehensively.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph focuses on a single idea, and your thoughts are well-organized.
coherence cohesion
Your greeting and closing are warm and appropriate for the context, showcasing a friendly tone.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,