The table shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished.The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visits during the same two periods.
The table illustrates the number of visitors to Ashdown
Museum
before and after it was reconstructed. The pie graphs show the answers of visitors to questions about their satisfaction with the museum
during the two periods.
Overall
, it is clear from the charts that the number of people
who visited the museum
increased after refurbishment. Additionally
, the main percentage of people
was dissatisfied with museum
, but after reconstruction Add an article
the museum
a museum
this
number of answers decreased and the people
who were very glad to visit it went up.
In terms of numbers, the visitor's amount was lower at the beginning at approximately 75,000 per year and Correct quantifier usage
number of people
its
rose to just above 90,000 per year. For Correct pronoun usage
it
people
sanctification, it had a significant per cent at exactly 40%, people
who did not have satisfaction, and the less crucial feature was people
, who had satisfied answer
at 30%. The minimum percentage was people
who had no answer
to question
at 5%.
After reconstruction, Correct article usage
the question
people
who dissatisfied
fell to 15%, Add a missing verb
were dissatisfied
while
satisfied people
soared to 40%, replacing bad
Correct article usage
the bad
answer
proportion with good ones. The people
who had a very satisfied mood was also
a large amount at nearly one-third and the little per cent get people
who were very dissatisfied about the museum
and who did not answer
at 5% for both.Submitted by Kawasaki on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words museum, people, answer with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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