Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre explain why the sports and leisure centres is importsnt for the local community describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes
Dear local council,
l am writing about your decision for closing the sports and leisure centre in our
neighborhood
in Change the spelling
neighbourhood
west
of star street.
At present my family and a lot of people in our area are using Add an article
the west
this
department. I am sure that all of them all of them
are satisfied with Remove the redundancy
apply
this
organization.
On the other hand
,having a great system with excellent equipment,
is vital and necessary for our area
because that causes a lot of liveliness and health for people, and that increases positive morality in our society . Remove the comma
apply
This
system causes young people to avoid different kinds of violence and keeps children away from criminal behaviors
outside of Change the spelling
behaviours
home
.
Add an article
the home
To conclude
, I request you to allow us to continue this
entertainment and sport
Change the noun form
sports
center
in our
neighborhood. please inform Change the spelling
centre
board
of directors about our request. I hope you reconsider your decision
Add an article
the board
according
my Add the preposition
according to
explaination
.
Best wishes,
Ali Correct your spelling
explanation
saremi
Correct your spelling
semi
saree
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Grammar
Review grammar and punctuation usage, it will help your letter appear more polished.
Lexical Resource
Consider using more varied vocabulary and phrases to enhance the sophistication of your writing.
Grammar
Ensure to consistently capitalize proper nouns like "Star Street" and organization names.
Task Response
Your letter addresses all parts of the prompt comprehensively, providing clear details on personal and community use of the center, its importance, and the potential effects of its closure.
Coherence and Cohesion
The logical structure of your letter is strong, with clear paragraphs dedicated to specific points, making it easy to follow your argument.
Greeting and Closing
Your closing statement effectively summarizes your request and adds a polite tone to your letter.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.