Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre explain why the sports and leisure centres is importsnt for the local community describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes

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Dear local council, l am writing about your decision for closing the sports and leisure centre in our
neighborhood
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in
west
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of star street. At present my family and a lot of people in our area are using
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department. I am sure that all of them
all of them
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are satisfied with
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organization.
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,having a great system with excellent equipment
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is vital and necessary for our area because that causes a lot of liveliness and health for people, and that increases positive morality in our society .
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system causes young people to avoid different kinds of violence and keeps children away from criminal
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outside of
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.
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, I request you to allow us to continue
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entertainment and
sport
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center
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in our neighborhood. please inform
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of directors about our request. I hope you reconsider your decision
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my
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. Best wishes, Ali
saremi
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saree
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Grammar
Review grammar and punctuation usage, it will help your letter appear more polished.
Lexical Resource
Consider using more varied vocabulary and phrases to enhance the sophistication of your writing.
Grammar
Ensure to consistently capitalize proper nouns like "Star Street" and organization names.
Task Response
Your letter addresses all parts of the prompt comprehensively, providing clear details on personal and community use of the center, its importance, and the potential effects of its closure.
Coherence and Cohesion
The logical structure of your letter is strong, with clear paragraphs dedicated to specific points, making it easy to follow your argument.
Greeting and Closing
Your closing statement effectively summarizes your request and adds a polite tone to your letter.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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