Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - Say why a driving license is advantageous. - Recommend a driving school. - Give any extra guidelines/tips You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Sope, I was thrilled when you mentioned your interest in learning how to drive and I feel even better that you are requesting some opinions from me:
Firstly
, I would like to mention that a driver's license is very essential for any individual who wants to drive;it certifies that you are fit to carry out
this
act in any part of the world. To get a great experience like I did, I would recommend you register with “Enny Driving School” which is located at “No 1, Abby Street in Gbagada”, close to your residence. The instructors are very detailed with their teaching style so understanding every lesson would not be a problem.
Also
, some very important topics
such
as “road safety rules” and “road signs” are embedded in their curriculum and these topics are essential to have knowledge about so as to avoid harassment by road officials. Fundamentally, I highly suggest that you always be early for your daily classes as the instructors do not like to be delayed because of the number of students they have to attend to daily.
Additionally
, always follow the instructions given by your instructors so as to ensure that you understand what they teach you.
Also
, always ask questions Sope, especially when you do not understand anything. Oh, Sope! I really must stop here but I hope you find my suggestions helpful and I cannot wait to hear all about your experience. All my love, Oluwadamilola.
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Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure that there is a clear separation between different points or ideas. This will make your letter more organized and easier to follow. For example, use a new paragraph when you start talking about the driving school.
Coherence and Cohesion
Try to use transition words and phrases to improve the flow of your writing. This will help connect your ideas smoothly.
Task Achievement
The letter responds fully to the task, addressing all the points asked: the advantages of having a driving license, recommending a driving school, and providing extra tips.
Task Achievement
The tone of the letter is friendly and appropriate for the context of writing to a friend.
Coherence and Cohesion
The opening and closing of the letter are warm and engaging, which is suitable for a friendly letter.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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