The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Austrailian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The two charts above illustrate the
energy
spending and greenhouse gas
emission patterns in an Australian home on average, divided in
a variety of components. Generally, most Change preposition
into
energy
was spent on heating, while
there has been a balanced distribution in the origins where greenhouse gas
was produced.
Accounted for nearly three quarters in the usage of power supplied, heating (42%) and water heating (30%) were components which
Aussie homes spent the most Change preposition
on which
amount
of energy
at
on average. Change preposition
apply
While
the waste gas
produced by heating water remains at a similar proportion at 32%, "heating" generated a signifcantly
smaller Correct your spelling
significantly
amount
of gas
in contrast
, more than halved in comparison to water heating.
"Refrigeration" and "other appicances
" are items that spend a relatively less Correct your spelling
appliances
applicants
amount
of power by households, accounting for 7% and 15% respectively. However
, the ratio for these items were
doubled in terms Change the verb form
was
the
greenhouse Change preposition
of the
gas
released to the environment, reaching nearly 15% and 30%.
With only 2 and 4 percent
, the least Change the spelling
per cent
amount
of energy
has been spent on "cooling" and "lighting" compared to ather
items used by Australian homes. Correct your spelling
other
On the other hand
, there has been a slight increase in the proportion of waste gas
emissions for "cooling" at 3 percent
, Change the spelling
per cent
while
the rate for "lighting" has been
doubled.Unnecessary verb
apply
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, gas, amount with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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