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The bar chart below shows the production of the world's oil in OPEC and Non-OPEC countries. Write a short report for university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The bar chart below shows the production of the world's oil in OPEC and Non-OPEC countries. Write a short report for university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The chart above shows the production of the world's oil in
OPEC
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 and non-
OPEC
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countries
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. From the year 1980 to the year 2020. The
years
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 from 1080 to 2000 had the most amount of non-
OPEC
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countries
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 in the world, with no other
OPEC
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countries
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.
Therefore
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, the
OPEC
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Middle
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 East
countries
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 have been at their lowest.
On the other hand
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, the
years
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 from 2000 to 2010 were almost even, but the
Middle
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 Eastern
countries
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 were slightly more.
Moreover
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, the non-
OPEC
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 and the other-
OPEC
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 we exactly the same.
Moreover
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, the
years
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 from 2010 to 2020 had the most amount of
OPEC
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Middle
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 East
countries
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 ever. That leads us to the fact that at that time
Middle
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 Eastern
countries
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 had grown a lot, and got much more than the other
OPEC
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countries
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.
Overall
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,
OPEC
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Middle
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 East
countries
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 have the most amount of numbers in all
years
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.
However
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, you can always look at the chart and get the information that you want.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "moreover".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 88%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words opec, countries, years, middle with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Bar chart
  • World oil production
  • OPEC (Organization of Petroleum Exporting Countries)
  • Non-OPEC countries
  • Trends
  • Data analysis
  • Comparison
  • Oil reserves
  • Barrels per day
  • Percentage share
  • Production capacity
  • Fluctuate
  • Peak
  • Rise/increase
  • Decline/decrease
  • Over time
  • Crude oil
  • Export
  • Market dynamics
  • Energy sector
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