The bar chart below shows the production of the world's oil in OPEC and Non-OPEC countries. Write a short report for university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The bar chart below shows the production of the world's oil in OPEC and Non-OPEC countries.

Write a short report for university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The chart above shows the production of the world's oil in
OPEC
and non-
OPEC
countries
. From the year 1980 to the year 2020. The
years
from 1080 to 2000 had the most amount of non-
OPEC
countries
in the world, with no other
OPEC
countries
.
Therefore
, the
OPEC
Middle
East
countries
have been at their lowest.
On the other hand
, the
years
from 2000 to 2010 were almost even, but the
Middle
Eastern
countries
were slightly more.
Moreover
, the non-
OPEC
and the other-
OPEC
we exactly the same.
Moreover
, the
years
from 2010 to 2020 had the most amount of
OPEC
Middle
East
countries
ever. That leads us to the fact that at that time
Middle
Eastern
countries
had grown a lot, and got much more than the other
OPEC
countries
.
Overall
,
OPEC
Middle
East
countries
have the most amount of numbers in all
years
.
However
, you can always look at the chart and get the information that you want.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 88%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words opec, countries, years, middle with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Bar chart
  • World oil production
  • OPEC (Organization of Petroleum Exporting Countries)
  • Non-OPEC countries
  • Trends
  • Data analysis
  • Comparison
  • Oil reserves
  • Barrels per day
  • Percentage share
  • Production capacity
  • Fluctuate
  • Peak
  • Rise/increase
  • Decline/decrease
  • Over time
  • Crude oil
  • Export
  • Market dynamics
  • Energy sector
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