The graph below shows the consumption of fish and other kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and other kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.
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The line graph depicts the per capita consumption of fish, lamb,
beef
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, and chicken in a European country from 1979 to 2004.
Overall
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, Chicken's share rocketed dramatically, surpassing
beef
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as the most popular meal,
whereas
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beef
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and lamb experienced a notably significant decline.
Although
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Fish consumption fluctuated, it consistently remained the lowest. In 1979,
beef
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, as regular red
meat
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, had a substantial share of all other types of
meat
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, with nearly 220
grams
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per person in a week, but
then
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fell sharply over time to around 100
grams
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by 2004. Lamb followed the same trend, decreasing over the same period from 150
grams
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to just over 50
grams
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.
In contrast
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, one accessible white
meat
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, chicken, faced remarkable growth, rising from approximately 150
grams
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in 1979 to almost 250
grams
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by 2004, making it the most consumed
meat
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, playing a predominant role in everyone's weekly food plate. Fish consumption remained stable, fluctuating slightly around 50
grams
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per week.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words beef, meat, grams with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • fish
  • meat
  • poultry
  • beef
  • lamb
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • gradual
  • significant
  • fluctuate
  • peak
  • trough
  • steady
  • correlation
  • period
  • data
  • comparison
  • predominant
  • kilograms per capita
  • dietary habits
  • health consciousness
  • sustainability
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