J. The table below shows the expenses of a used bookstore in Scotland for the first and last month of the same year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

J. The table below shows the expenses of a used bookstore in Scotland for the first and last month of the same year. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The presented table compares data about how much money one special second-hand book shop spent in January and December of 2018.
Overall
, it was important that the money that was invested in the
last
month was higher than the first month;
additionally
, the main item that spent a great deal of money on it was Rent, which had an increasing trend.
According to
the graph, at the start, Rent, the crucial factor that was really costly, was 3222;
then
it increased significantly and hit 1909 in December. Utilities, the second one, reduced by roughly 200 dollars and reached 265 in December;
in contrast
, Other in the beginning was 444 after that, it climbed slightly to 599 in the
last
month. In January, marketing and Wages and benefits
,
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had approximately the same amount at 260;
thereafter
, Marketing was nearly 100
while
another one declined Marginally to 226. The picture demonstrates that Equipment, Professional fees, and Maintenance respectively were 53, 51, and 10 dollars in the initial time. Later Equipment 10$ went down;
however
, the others leapt Considerably, so Professional Fees scored 132 and Maintenance hit 42.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • expenses
  • used bookstore
  • comparison
  • categories
  • increases
  • decreases
  • total expenses
  • economic factors
  • seasonal demands
  • business model
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