your English-speaking friend has asked for your help with a college project he or she is doing about celebrating New Year in different countries. write a letter to your friend. in your letter, write a letter to your friend. in your letter : 1.say how important new year is to people in your country. 2.describe how new year is celebrated in your country. 3.explain what you like about New Year celebrations in your country.

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Dear Joey, I am writing
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letter to give an insight into the New
Year
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’s celebration in my nation for your final project at Oxford University, England on the same topic.
First,
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according to
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many
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, revelling next
year
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is rather important because it brings good fortune for them
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, some assert it is a good way to thank the almighty for blessing one more
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.
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, different
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try to plan
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event
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their tastes. As many
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have faith in religion, they relish worshipping God for the entire 31 December night.
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, some individuals like to enjoy the
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night of the
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while
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attending live concerts or dance parties and
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like me, like to visit hill stations to start New
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with the fresh air.
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, I personally admire the energy of youngsters and children regarding it. The most commendable thing is the
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the resolutions , which are the goals and aims to be achieved in the following
year
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.
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can ensure a new direction to take action for positive results. I hope above mentioned information will be helpful for you. I can’t wait to meet you soon. Yours loving friend, Jacob
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coherence cohesion
Try to use varied sentence structures. Some sentences feel repetitive.
coherence cohesion
Ensure consistency in tenses and improve grammar in some areas.
coherence cohesion
You have included a greeting and a closing, which makes the letter feel complete and polite.
task achievement
You have addressed all the points in the prompt, providing a complete response.
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The tone of the letter is friendly and suitable for a letter to a friend.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • significant
  • reflection
  • goals
  • loved ones
  • fireworks
  • gatherings
  • traditions
  • public events
  • religious ceremonies
  • festive atmosphere
  • reconnect
  • exchanging gifts
  • resolutions
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