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An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter offer to find somewhere for your friend to stay give advice about what to do and see in your area give information about what clothes to bring

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Dear Maria, Hope you are doing great! I'm delighted that you are planning to visit Vancouver next month. I'm aware of the fact that finding a budget-friendly
accomodation
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accommodation
 ought to be very difficult in
this
 metropolitan city. So, I can look up
for
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an apartment on
air bnb
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airbnb
 near the coast, as units are comparatively cheaper in that area, and commuting will be convenient as well. I would love to show you the Vancouver Art
Gallary
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, they have ancient paintings from the
60s
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'60s
.
Also
, I know how much you love
sea-life
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; so you should definitely visit the aquarium and beaches on the outskirts. Night markets are
also
 a
highlght
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highlight
 of the season,
specially
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 the one near the airport, the Richmond night market. You might be
skeptical
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 about what
clother
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clothes
 to carry as the weather is very unpredictable here. As fall is approaching, I would recommend you to carry
couple
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 of jackets and sweaters alongside your summer closet. I'm really excited to see you! Kind regards, Mehak
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spelling
Ensure there are no minor spelling errors, such as "clother" instead of "clothes."
content
Consider providing more specific information or examples about the attractions to strengthen the task response.
greeting and closing
The letter opens with a warm greeting and closes with a friendly farewell, maintaining an appropriate tone throughout.
paragraph structure
Each paragraph covers a distinct idea: accommodation, activities, and what to pack, which enhances coherence.
logical structure
The writing is clear, and ideas are logically structured, making it easy to follow.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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