Some people think that secondary school should add international news as a subject; others think that it is a waste of valuable time. Discuss both views.
Other people believe that the secondary level of education should have an additional subject
that is
international news
, while
others think it is just a complete waste of time
. In this
essay I will discuss both viewpoints; the benefits and drawbacks of including international news
as a new subject.
On one hand, the advantage of having an additional lesson like international news
can help students to be well-equipped for globalization. Furthermore
, the learners' knowledge may expand in the field of language and economy. For example
, during foreign exchange student programs, it will not be hard for a pupil to interact with and study the designated destination. For example
, the language is honed by a student through exposure to Chinese articles. However
, the program will only be beneficial to foreign exchange and well-traveled students.
On the other hand
, having another class means another investment of resources, teachers, and modules. Additionally
, time
is the most expensive currency from the learners' perspective. There are other things a scholar may spend their time
such
as being involved in physical activities and mental health education, which is more impactful to have a normal study-life balance. Thus
, from the learner's perspective, it is not necessary and practical at the moment.
However
, if the benefit outweighs the negative outcomes, therefore
it must be implemented. But for now, its advantages are just mere on a superficial level and it needs further
reviews from the regulating body. The students have too much on their plate to balance such
as academic and extra-curricular activities and having international news
as a new subject will result to
information overload.
In conclusion, international Change preposition
in
news
can be beneficial yet there are more topics that need to be incorporated into the curriculum. On a positive note, a good language skill set will be improved yet, its drawbacks such
as expenses and time
weigh more importance.Submitted by emmagallares on
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task achievement
Provide more detailed examples to strengthen your argument, particularly in the second body paragraph, where examples of alternative valuable activities outside academics could be explored further to make your point more convincing.
coherence cohesion
While your main points are clear, ensure that each paragraph maintains focus on its specific theme or idea throughout. Avoid jumping to conclusions within a paragraph.
coherence cohesion
The essay has a clear introduction and conclusion, which effectively sets the stage for discussion and wraps up the arguments.
task achievement
You have presented both views on the topic effectively, capturing the essence of the debate about including international news in the curriculum.
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