The table illustrated the number of research particularly in the years 2001 and 2010 of the local and international students.
The table illustrated the
number
of research particularly in the years 2001 and 2010 of the local and international students
.
first,
it is obviously shown through this
table, the difference average between the total number
of students
in both 2001 and 2010, thus
, the numbers have doubled in 2010 compared with the other amount in 2010, no doubt the massive increase in international students
affected the total number
of students
in 2010.
In 2001 the table showed a huge number
of local students
with 33.657 while
the international students
were only 5.192 and both compose the total amount of students
with 38.849,
In 2010 there was remarkably an increase in the number
of international students
with 14.593, which surely has affected the total amount of students
54.081, while
the local students
were nearly the same average number
in 2001 with a small increase from 33.657 in 2001 to 39.488 in 2010.Submitted by Mido on
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