The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020.

The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020.
The line graph provided reveals data on the population who participated in various activities held at a community centre in Melbourne, Australia over 20
years
.
Overall
, it can be seen that the trends of
number
of participants for Film club and musical performances saw moderate fluctuations.
To begin
, it is apparent that film club and martial arts had the most individuals taking part in these activities in comparison with others. The film club stood at 64 in 2000, the highest
number
, and
then
it remained constant with a very slight fluctuation over the following 20
years
and finished at the same level it started. Interestingly, martial arts experienced significant growth over these
years
. It stood at approximately 16 in 2000, where it was the lowest in comparison with other data and
then
in 2010, it dramatically rose over the following 10
years
and finished at 55, tuned the second high in 2020.
In contrast
, the
number
of amateur dramatics experienced a plunge in 2005 to 38.
Nonetheless
, it remained constant by 2005 at 36 and
then
dropped significantly to below 10 participants over the following 15
years
. What is more, musical performances had no participants or it wasn't on the plan until 2005, but the
number
of individuals taking part in
this
activity increased gradually over the following 15 periods, and finished at 20 in 2020.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • participants
  • social centre
  • comparison
  • trends
  • consistently popular
  • gained popularity
  • lost popularity
  • community interest
  • availability of facilities
  • social factors
  • economic factors
  • external events
  • economic downturns
  • health crises
  • demographic changes
  • aging population
  • marketing
  • community outreach programs
  • participation rates
  • Melbourne
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