A museum near your house is looking for people to do part-time vountary/unpaid work. you would like to do some voulntary work at the museum. write a letter to the museum director to apply for voluntary work in letter. explain why you want to do voluntary work at museum. describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful give details of when you would be available for work.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
letter to express my interest
to join
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in joining
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the
museum
for
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apply
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part time
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part-time
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as
volunteer
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a volunteer
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. I am doing
Bachelor's
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a Bachelor's
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in arts and I am
full-time
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a full-time
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student
in
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at
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college
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College
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. From
this
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apply
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September 2024 to December 2024, I have drop from my college. I
don't
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want to waste my four months at home, so I decided to do some work.
Last
week I saw
advertisement
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an advertisement
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on the TV that Lisa
museum
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Museum
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is hiring unpaid work as part-time. I want to apply for
this
position and the good thing is that
this
museum
is only 4 km from my home. I have great skills matching for
this
position. I have three years
experience
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of experience
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in customer service. I am
multitasking
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a multitasking
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person with great team leadership qualities. I always wanted to work in
museum
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a museum
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as I have so much interest in history.
This
museum
is based on
past
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the past
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history of warriors by working there I can get more information on their past. Please let me know if there is any form or application I have to submit or fill
.
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out.
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I am available seven days until December. Hope to hear back soon Yours sincerely, Sin
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coherence cohesion
Consider dividing your paragraphs more clearly, as this will improve readability and flow.
task achievement
Try to expand on specific tasks you might be able to perform at the museum or how you could contribute.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are correctly formatted and polite.
task achievement
The letter conveys a clear sense of purpose and enthusiasm for volunteer work.
task achievement
You have effectively mentioned your relevant experience in customer service, which adds value to your application.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • part-time volunteer
  • cultural heritage
  • community engagement
  • museum curator
  • customer liaison
  • public speaking
  • team collaboration
  • scheduling availability
  • artifact preservation
  • educational workshops
  • multilingual communication
  • curatorial assistance
  • event coordination
  • visitor services
  • exhibit maintenance
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