The pie charts below show the share of the Swiss Watch Market by brand in 2009 and 2019. Summarise the indormation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie charts below show the share of the Swiss Watch Market by brand in 2009 and 2019. Summarise the indormation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The Pie chart illustrates the

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taken by

Rolex

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Oregna

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, Cartier, Patek Longinis and AP in the years 2009 and 2019. It is clear from the data,

Rolex

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had the largest

market

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at 39.5%, followed by

Oregna

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at 15.6%. Over a decade, except

Rolex

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, all the brands have witnessed a decline in the

market

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whereas

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Rolex

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has increased to 46.7% from 39.5%. In the year 2009,

Oregna

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, Cartier, Patek, and AP had a 60.5%

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combined and over a decade

this

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had dropped to 53.3%.

Oregna

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had been impacted the most with a drop of 2.9% whilst Cartier had been impacted the least as it witnessed a drop of approximately 0.7%.

Initially

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, in 2009

Rolex

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occupied 39.5% of the total Swiss Watches

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and over the course of a decade,

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to all other brands

Rolex

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alone had witnessed an increase in the total

market

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Vocabulary: Replace the words share, rolex, oregna, market with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

150 words

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