Some people say that the main environmental problem of our times is the loss of a particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is argued that the
extinction
of species
of flora and fauna are important environmental problems, while
others think that other environmental issues require more attention. Although
the loss of species
is affecting our ecosystem
, I believe that climate change and pollution
are more pressing as they are directly connected to the extinction
of species
.
On the one hand, the ecosystem
is directly affected by the loss of plants and animals. This
is because all species
play an inevitable role in maintaining ecological balance as they contribute to the food chain, and once a species
is gone it would imbalance the cycle. For example
, a decrease in bee population threatens pollination which is essential for numerous crops and the extinction
of predators like tigers and wolves would lead to an overpopulation of some species
and habitat degradation. However
, the ecosystem
is interconnected to climate change and pollution
.
On the other hand
, climatical changes and pollution
not only cause species
to go extinct but also
affect every aspect of life on earth. This
is to say that rising temperatures, extreme weather conditions and pollution
such
as air and water are posing a threat to the existence of living organisms. For instance
, glaciers are melting due to
global warming which is resulting in the rise of water levels, and these circumstances pose a threat to plants, animals, humans and other species
. I therefore
believe that environmental issues should be tackled as they will naturally bring the ecosystem
to balance.
In conclusion, the extinction
of species
is connected to other environmental problems like climate change and pollution
which should be alleviated as they will help to maintain a
ecological balance.Change the article
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