The table below shows the number of visitors to ashdown museum duringthe year befor and year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.
the pie charts depict the
number
of visitors' satisfaction a year
before and after refurbishment
however
, the table gives information about the total number
of visitors who visits
Ashdown museum during the Correct subject-verb agreement
visit
year
before and after.
The number
of people
who visited the Ashdown museum before refurbishment
was 74000 that
results show 40% of them were dissatisfied and 305 of them were very dissatisfied. The Correct word choice
apply
number
of visitors who were very satisfied was 15% and satisfied was 10% the littlest percent
Change the spelling
per cent
were
no Change the verb form
was
response
with 5%.
The Fix the agreement mistake
responses
number
of people
who visited during the year
after refurbishment
was 92000 which is approximately more than 2000 people
. The result of surveys of visitor satisfaction this
year
shows 40% of them were satisfied which is 30% more than the year
before refurbishment
and very satisfied people
were 35% which is more than twice the before refurbishment
. Dissatisfied groups were 15% which is less than a half year
before and very dissatisfied and no responses were the same as 5%.Submitted by TUTOO on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, year, refurbishment, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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