The table and pie charts give information about the total value and the sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 to 2000.

The table and pie charts give information about the total value and the sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 to 2000.
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The table and pie charts give information about the total
value
and the sources of
fish
imported to the US between 1988 to 2000. The table illustrates the
value
of
fish
importance to
United
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the United
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States between 1988 to 2000. There are
also
charts which show the source countries and their
ratio
of imported
fish
to the United States.
Overall
, It seems that the total
value
slightly increased during these periods. The importance
ratio
from China
also
rose between 1988 to 2000 but it was the opposite for Canada. İt had a downward trend in the relevant years. Regarding the table, the
value
of the imports rose from 6,57 billion dollars to 10.72 billion dollars. At the start of the period Canada had 60% of the
fish
that were imported to the United States and it was the biggest source country.
Then
it fell to 34% in 1992 and they had the lowest
ratio
in 2000 with %28. But the situation was the opposite for China. İt started to %13 in 1988 and steadily increased
then
had a peak o with %30 in 2000. The most important point in
this
pie chart was the change in the
ratio
in
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Others.
While
the
ratio
for it %27 in 1988, it had a significant increase in 1992 with %46.
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