In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelleing inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantage? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knoweldge or experience.
Some
people
believe that in the future all vehicles
will be driverless
, and vehicles
will only carry passengers. I personally believe that although
because of driverless
vehicles
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vehicles,
people
will no longer be able to enjoy driving, the benefits of driverless
cars
outweigh the drawbacks because there is no possibility
of accidents
in driverless
vehicles
.
The primary benefit of driverless
vehicles
is there is no possibility
of road accidents
. With a human driver, there is always a possibility
of an accident. A human driver becomes distracted by something while
driving or may violate the traffic rules which may lead to an accident. If vehicles
are driverless
, there will be no driver, and no possibility
of being distracted, therefore
, there will be no risks of accidents
, life loss or injury. For example
, in Australia, road accidents
have reduced around 60% after driverless
cars
have been introduced on the roads. Therefore
, I believe that driverless
cars
and other vehicles
are beneficial because they save lives.
In main drawback of driverless
vehicles
is people
will no longer be able to enjoy driving. People
who love driving and enjoy it as a favourite time pass will no longer be able to do it if all vehicles
become driverless
. People
will no longer enjoy long drives. For example
, around 45% of people
in Japan have told
that after the launch of Verb problem
said
driverless
cars
, they miss driving their own vehicles
because it was a source of pleasure and enjoyment for them. Driverless
vehicles
have restricted that enjoyment for them. However
, I personally believe that saving lives is more important than enjoyment.
In conclusion, although
driverless
vehicles
do not let the public enjoy driving, they are free of accidents
, and there is
no chances of life loss or injury. Change the verb form
are
Therefore
, the advantages of driverless
cars
outweigh the disadvantages.Submitted by rahman_rehana on
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task achievement
To enhance your task achievement, you might consider expanding a bit more on the counter-argument. Discuss why the draw of enjoying driving is less significant compared to the safety benefits. This will demonstrate a balanced consideration of both sides.
coherence cohesion
Ensure clear transitions between ideas and paragraphs to improve the logical flow. Words like 'furthermore,' 'moreover,' or 'additionally' can help in maintaining coherence.
introduction conclusion present
The introduction clearly outlines the thesis statement, providing a clear direction for the essay.
relevant specific examples
Effective use of specific statistics makes your argument more convincing, such as the accident reduction in Australia.
logical structure
The essay has a clear structure with distinct paragraphs for each main point, which makes it easy to follow.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite