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The table and pie charts below show the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010.

The table and pie charts below show the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010.
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The table and pie charts show
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information about the
number
 and percentages of research
students
 in Australian universities respectively, broken down into two aspects: origin and gender, in 2001 and 2010.
Overall
, it can be clearly observed that
majority
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the majority
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 of research pupils were made up of locals,
whereas
 that of
oversea
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overseas
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students
 were minor in both years.
However
, it is interesting to note that the
number
 of
students
 from abroad
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 on the rise.
To begin
 with, a closer look at the table can be seen that in both 2001 and 2010,
Australia
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Australian
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university
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universities
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 were primarily made up
with
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of
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 domestic
students
. It is noticeable that the total
number
 of applicants
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 to
Australia
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Australian
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 universities in 2010 roughly doubled than in the past.
While
the
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oversea
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overseas
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students
 show considerable growth with three-fold of its previous statistics at nearly 15,000
students
, locals only experienced
small
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rose
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 at approximately 6,000
students
. With regards to sexes,
while
 the proportion of male and female
locals
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local
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students
were
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 nearly the same, there distinct
difference
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differences
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 found in foreign
students
. In 2011, at 9% , Overseas male
students
was
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 larger than that of
female
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females
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,
whereas
 in 2010
number
 of
female
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females
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overtaken
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 its male counterparts with 3% more at 15%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas, while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 89%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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