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A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there

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Dear Joey, How are you? I am writing in response to your letter regarding your relocation to my hometown next month and seeking my advice for a better stay. I would like to suggest to you the Delts Rise locality of my town which is fully equipped with a number of amenities like hospitals, universities, separate houses and apartments at a reasonable cost. It is not only near downtown but
also
 you can enjoy the Mt. Hallen range of mountains from the balcony.
Additionally
, you don’t need to worry about transportation channels here in the city as train and bus services are frequently available every 15 minutes. Most recently, Cabacare has started a low-cost cab service with a
pass
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 service for working professionals which is very cost-effective.
Lastly
, since you are quite friendly by nature and obviously you will love to visit Lake Santiago every Saturday where both cultural and kids events have been organised. There you can easily get connected to many people of your interest. I hope my advice will work very well for you. I can’t wait to see you soon. Yours loving friend, Jacob
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task response
Consider adding more specific examples or details to enhance the description of the suggested living area.
coherence
Ensure transitions between paragraphs are smooth and ideas flow naturally from one to the next.
coherence
The letter has a clear, logical structure with a well-organized response to the prompt.
task response
The tone of the letter is friendly and suitable for writing to a friend, which enhances engagement.
coherence
Each paragraph addresses a separate point which keeps the content clear and easy to follow.
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