The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017
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The graph represents the information about how many people visited a particular
Carribean
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Caribbean
island over a seven-year
period
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from 2010 to 2017.
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, what stands out from the graph is that there were considerable upward trends in both the
number
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of total visitors and tourists staying on cruise ships,
while
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the
number
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of visitors who preferred staying on
island
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had a slight increase over the
period
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. Looking at the details, as regards the data about the visitors who stayed on cruise ships started at around 0.25
million
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in 2010,
then
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there was a fluctuation until 2013, at which point it levelled off at just 1
million
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in 2014.
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the
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went up slightly, finishing at 2
million
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at the end
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of the
period
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. If we look at the
number
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of average tourists, the
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rose significantly from 1
million
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in 2010, without any declines and stayed stable at approximately 2,75
million
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in a one-year
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between 2015 and 2016. After that, in the
last
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year ,there was a sharp increase to 3,5
million
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.
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, the
number
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of people staying on the island had another trend. Having remained stable at 0,75
million
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in the first two years, the
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increased gradually to 1,5
million
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in 2013
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and
then
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stayed constant at
this
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point until 2015.
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, despite a tiny decrease to 1,25
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in 2016, the
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levelled off at the end of the given time.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words period, number, million, figure with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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