The diagram below shows the process of producing yogurt in a factory. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The diagram illustrates the manufacturing process of
yoghurt
.
Overall
, the production of yoghurt
consists of seven steps and two stages beginning with boiling milk
and ending with pouring yoghurt
into special cups for further
transportation. The main ingredients are milk
, live bacteria, and sugar. The first step takes thirty minutes while
the fourth step lasts four hours.
The whole process can be done manually except for transportation.
In the first stage, milk
is boiled at 90 degrees, making yoghurt
more thicker and then
the temperature is reduced to 44 degrees to cool the milk
. After
this
, consistency is added to a live bacteria and subsequently
needs to stand at 37 degrees for four hours after it is put in the fridge.
In the second stage, the cold yoghurt
is included with sugar and then
poured into special cups which is the final step to be ready for shops to sell.Submitted by almirasartayeva on
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