You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: In some countries there are more young people choosing to enrol in work-based training instead of attending university. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
It is well known that there is an increasing number of youth who prefer work-based training to a third-level education. In my opinion, the
prons
exceed the cons of Correct your spelling
pros
this
tendency, especially for developing and poor states.
Firstly
, presently companies need workers who already have great practical skills. Therefore
, directors often do not mind if a person has a diploma or not. For example
, businesses connected to IT generally do not demand any certificates from colleges or universities. Secondly
, a special course that prepares to work tends to last
a smaller period of time and to be cheaper than a whole bachelor's degree. Furthermore
, a person who enrols in universities usually has to pass difficult exams, whereas
training does not require any. Thirdly
, there is a small number of educational facilities in Africa and some parts of Asia. So, offline and online training may be the only ways to get jobs.
On the other hand
, there are some disadvantages. I believe, that the prime drawback is that for some occupations, such
as doctors and judges, individuals need to study in universities. So work-based training does not suit all people. Moreover
, it is hard to get a well-paid and prestigious job unless a member of society has a diploma. Because usually to have these jobs a candidate must have not only experience but also
a good education.
To conclude
, whilst an individual is not able to apply for some positions, he can get many other opportunities, not spending a few years to gain a degree. Work-based training is also
a very effective path for a person who comes from an unprivileged family.Submitted by leshchynser on
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Work on addressing potential counterarguments in more detail. This will demonstrate a comprehensive understanding of the topic.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph transitions smoothly from one idea to the next, possibly by using more linking words and phrases. This will enhance coherence.
coherence cohesion
The essay has a clear and concise introduction that sets the stage for the discussion effectively.
coherence cohesion
A well-structured conclusion is provided, summing up the discussion and reiterating the main points effectively.
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The essay addresses the question directly, exploring both advantages and disadvantages, which ensures a balanced response.
Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...