The diagram below displays the life cycle of a lady bird and its anatomy. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
This
diagram provides us with the life cycle of a ladybird
as well as
the anatomy of the ladybug.
Firstly
, the lifecycle of the ladybird
consist
of four main stages:egg,larva,pupa and adult.Here is a summary of the key information given to us.The egg Change the verb form
consists
stage
begins with a female ladybird
laying eggs on the leaf as this
stage
lasts for approximatly
2 to 5 days.
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approximately
Larva
Correct article usage
The Larva
stage
which the
second one Add a missing verb
is the
aftre
hatching will remain for about 21 days Correct your spelling
after
then
we will have the Pupa were
the larva lasts for 7 days and Correct your spelling
where
finally
the adult stage
were
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where
pupa
transforms into an adult Correct article usage
the pupa
ladybird
completing the life cycle.
After that
we will see Add a comma
that,
tha
anatomy of a ladybug starting with the head equipped with the antennae and eyes which help the insect navigate Correct your spelling
the
his
Correct pronoun usage
its
enviroment
.Correct your spelling
environment
Next,
pronotum
is a sheild-like Add an article
the pronotum
structured
located behind the head Replace the word
structure
then
you will see the Elytra these are the hard , red protective wings.at
Capitalize word
At
last
the legs nd
as a fact a Correct your spelling
and
ladybird
has six legs aiding in moving.Submitted by alyacoub.bayan92 on
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ladybird, stage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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