The diagram below displays the life cycle of a lady bird and its anatomy. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below displays the life cycle of a lady bird and its anatomy.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
This
diagram provides us with the life cycle of a
ladybird
as well as
the anatomy of the ladybug.
Firstly
, the lifecycle of the
ladybird
consist
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of four main stages:egg,larva,pupa and adult.Here is a summary of the key information given to us.The egg
stage
begins with a female
ladybird
laying eggs on the leaf as
this
stage
lasts for
approximatly
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approximately
2 to 5 days.
Larva
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The Larva
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stage
which
the
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second one
aftre
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after
hatching will remain for about 21 days
then
we will have the Pupa
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where
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the larva lasts for 7 days and
finally
the adult
stage
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where
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pupa
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the pupa
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transforms into an adult
ladybird
completing the life cycle. After
that
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we will see
tha
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the
anatomy of a ladybug starting with the head equipped with the antennae and eyes which help the insect navigate
his
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its
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enviroment
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environment
.
Next,
pronotum
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is a sheild-like
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located behind the head
then
you will see the Elytra these are the hard , red protective wings.
at
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last
the legs
nd
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and
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as a fact a
ladybird
has six legs aiding in moving.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words ladybird, stage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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