You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter you should: introduce yourself describe your plans for the party and invite your neighbour to come to the party.

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Dear Mr Smith, I hope you

are do

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well! I am writing to invite you to a party at my home as I bought it

recenlty

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recently

. My name is Pramod, and I am your neighbour living in

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unit 104 which is next to your house. As I am new to

this

neighbourhood, I would like to meet you and get familiar with each other. I am working as a

softwared

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software

developer at a tech company located in the downtown.

However

, during the weekend, I go to a sports club where my friends and I play badminton. If you would like to join us, we would be happy to

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play sport with you. Talking about the party, there will be

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delicious food made by my mom and vintage vines.

Additionaly

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, there will be

a loud music

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playing till 2 am and I hope that

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not

disturbs

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you.

Although

I already got

the

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permission for the

late night

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party from all

neighbours

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the neighbours

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, I beg my pardon if

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disturbs you. I would be glad if you would come to the

pary

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party

. Yours Faithfully, Pramod

Submitted by pramodv997 on Mon Nov 04 2024

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Task Response

Check spelling and typing errors such as 'recenlty', 'sofwared developer', 'vines' (should be 'wines'), 'dose', 'its', and 'pary'.

Coherence and Cohesion

Make sure each paragraph focuses on a single idea more clearly.

Task Response

You have successfully covered all the required points: introducing yourself, sharing your plans, and inviting the neighbor to the party.

Coherence and Cohesion

The letter begins with a polite greeting and ends with a formal closing, showing good coherence.

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

186 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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