You are a member of an International Students' club. The club is organising an event to celebrate popular food from around the world. Write a letter to the event organiser, Luis. In your letter •• offer to make a popular dish from your country •• describe what this dish is •• explain why it should be included in the event

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Dear Luis, I am writing

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letter to make a few suggestions with regard to the upcoming event. As a member of the club, I was wondering whether I could make a

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from my country. The

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is called “Disy” and is a traditional Iranian food. The

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contains slices of lamb meat, potato and grains. It is more delicious when served with basil and onions.

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, you can add lemon and pepper to it. I learned the recipe from my grandmother back when I was a child and

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in Iran. I believe since

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is an international event, people would like to try different foods. I assure you that everyone will find my

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healthy and delicious. One taste of it would bring you back to your childhood and remind you of your beautiful memories. Thank you for your consideration. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Sara

Submitted by Rezaiesara1411 on Mon Nov 04 2024

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task achievement

Consider expanding on why the dish holds cultural significance or is popular in Iran to strengthen your argument for its inclusion.

coherence cohesion

Maintain a consistent level of detail throughout the letter to keep it balanced and engaging.

coherence cohesion

The letter starts with a polite greeting and concludes with a pleasant closing, creating a friendly tone throughout the correspondence.

coherence cohesion

The main points are well-organized, and each paragraph clearly supports the purpose of the letter.

task achievement

The tone is appropriately formal but friendly, making it suitable for addressing an event organizer in a club setting.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

153 words

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Enthusiastic
Contribution
Cuisine
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Ingredients
Preparation
Cultural significance
Celebrate
Diversity
Culinary traditions
National dish
Occasion
Unique attributes
Preparation method
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