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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

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Recycling plays an important role in today's lives as we produce more and more litter these days.
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 there are ongoing debates about whether it is the only way and the role of governments to enforce more laws for
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 to force them to recycle their debris, I strongly believe that it would not be enough for two compelling reasons.
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 with, improving public education about different environmental topics can be more effective than just
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 order. Simply put, when
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 are aware of the downsides and upsides of recycling, they will be encouraged to do that more and more.
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, you cannot force students to recycle their notebooks and paper staffs just by some laws because in
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 way they might obey rules and act rebelliously.
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, fostering the impacts of recycling on our environment by making creative content and showing its merits can be more useful.
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, providing more facilities and visible ways to recycle waste materials is important. It means that by putting more recycling bins in public areas and establishing more domestic recycling sites,
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 would be motivated to use
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 repeatedly. Take using glass bottles
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 of plastic ones as an obvious example. The more companies provide their products in glass packaging, the more
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 have the opportunity to mitigate the usage of plastics. In conclusion,
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 some
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 believe that the only way to enhance recycling is by enforcing strict laws by authorities, I once again restate my opinion that it would not be enough. There are better ways to foster the habit of reusing
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 as improving public education and providing useful facilities and infrastructure for doing that.

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task achievement
Provide a clearer thesis statement in the introduction to succinctly outline your main argument about laws not being enough.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph transitions smoothly by making the connections between ideas more explicit.
introduction conclusion present
The introduction presents the topic effectively, and the conclusion neatly summarizes the essay’s main points.
task achievement
The essay includes relevant examples to support its claims, like the one about using glass bottles instead of plastic.
logical structure
The structure follows a logical progression from arguing against laws as sole motivators to proposing education and facilities as solutions.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Waste management
  • Recycling
  • Sustainability
  • Mandatory
  • Voluntary
  • Legislative measures
  • Environmental impact
  • Public awareness
  • Regulation
  • Sanctions
  • Compliance
  • Recycling facilities
  • Consumer behavior
  • Waste reduction
  • Resource conservation
  • Circular economy
  • Eco-friendly
  • Biodegradable
  • Landfill
  • Global initiative
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