Some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoo. While others think that zoos are both entertaining and ecologically important. Discuss both views

There are split opinions regarding the

zoo

in which

animals

are kept. Some believe that it

have

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benifits

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benefits

to

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for

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animals

as these

zoo

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are ecologically important,

whereas

, another group of thinkers support that it is wrong for the

animals

as they do not have freedom.

However

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both have their own pros and cons.

Therefore

, before commenting on my decision both opinions would be discussed.

Exmine

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Examine

the former opinion, the two main advantages of keeping the

animals

in the

zoo

is breeding programs and research.

Firstly

, in

this

contemporary

area

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humans are clearing the land

in addition

to

make

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more space to build

building

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and houses.

This

way, some of the rare species of

animals

are getting

extict

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extinct

.

For instance

,

zoo

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zoos

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are playing a serious role to

re breed

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rebreed

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those

animals

and keep them safe in a healthy

enviornment

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environment

.

Secondly

, these

animals

are used for research where researchers find out the

baheviour

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behaviour

of each breed of

animals

and even they get the knowledge of any disease that they get.

Furthermore

, they are using

this

reseacrh

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research

to make

antidote

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so

disease

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could

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can be

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cured

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from

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its root. But

zoo

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zoos

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also

have some major disadvantages like

freedom

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the freedom

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of

animals

and

mistreating

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them

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apply

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. By

this

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I mean that

although

many

zoo

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zoos

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are great in

lengths

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length

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but

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apply

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they are unable to provide

freedom

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which

animal

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animals

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get in their natural habitant.

Moreover

, some of the

animals

are not friendly and

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managment

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management

of

zoo

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the zoo

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often

beat

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them or

make

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makes

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them suffer from hunger in

addtion

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addition

to

change

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changing

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their

bahiviour

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behaviour

.

However

, a proper way of inspections in

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the zoo

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zoo

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zoos

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which will help to

pervent

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prevent

this activities

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in

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a zoo

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zoo

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zoos

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can reduce the

curelty

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cruelty

on them. To

conculde

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conclude

and vocal my opinion, I would say that despite the problems that

has

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been faced by some of the

animals

in

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the zoo

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zoo

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zoos

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, I believe that keeping them in there is logical to study and

reporduce

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reproduce

.