The table below shows the household composition in a North American country from 1970 and 2003.
The provided table gives information about the mix of households in a North American country over a
thirty-tree
year period between 1970 and 2003.
Correct your spelling
thirty-three
Overall
, it is obviously seen that the analyzed period type
of family households, except married couple was slight
increase, Add an article
a slight
while
type
of non-family Add an article
the type
a type
household
rose dramatically.
Getting back to the details beginning of the year the lowest percentages from Fix the agreement mistake
households
type
of family Add an article
the type
a type
household
were father with kid and mother with kid. The figure accounted 9
% and 10% respectively. A slightly bigger percentage had other Change preposition
for 9
member
sharing. Fix the agreement mistake
members
However
, married couple
Fix the agreement mistake
couples
was
the highest percentage, Verb problem
had
made
up Wrong verb form
making
three fifths
per cent, but end of the year the indicator dropped significantly and peaked at 41%, Add a hyphen
three-fifths
by contrast
, the another
Correct quantifier usage
other
type
of family household
had negligible upward trends.
Furthermore
, by 1970 the percentages of single and room sharing of household
were almost low, Fix the agreement mistake
households
constituted
only 7% collectively, by 2003 Wrong verb form
constituting
this
figure had increased dramatically, with all of them growing four times larger than they were in 1970.Submitted by dnm.best on
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