The table below shows the household composition in a North American country from 1970 and 2003.

The table below shows the household composition in a North American country from 1970 and 2003.
The provided table gives information about the mix of households in a North American country over a
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year period between 1970 and 2003.
Overall
, it is obviously seen that the analyzed period
type
of family households, except married couple was
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increase,
while
type
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the type
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of non-family
household
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households
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rose dramatically. Getting back to the details beginning of the year the lowest percentages from
type
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of family
household
were father with kid and mother with kid. The figure accounted
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% and 10% respectively. A slightly bigger percentage had other
member
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members
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sharing.
However
, married
couple
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couples
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was
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the highest percentage,
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up
three fifths
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per cent, but end of the year the indicator dropped significantly and peaked at 41%,
by contrast
, the
another
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other
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type
of family
household
had negligible upward trends.
Furthermore
, by 1970 the percentages of single and room sharing of
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households
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were almost low,
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only 7% collectively, by 2003
this
figure had increased dramatically, with all of them growing four times larger than they were in 1970.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words type, household with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.

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