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Nowadays it is possible to use computers and mobile phones for automatic language translation, and there is no need for human translators and interpreters. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Some
people
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 say that with the advancement of technology, there is no need for human translators and interpreters. I disagree with their viewpoint. A number of arguments surround my opinion in the upcoming paragraphs. The main reason why individuals think that it is possible to communicate with
people
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 in other languages is because everything is getting modernized, especially with the use of technology. As it allows us to interact with
people
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 from all around the world in a matter of minutes, and at
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 a fast pace.
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, our access to smart devices has made our lives easier, and more convenient. In terms of having a lot of options,
one
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 can watch programs in another language with the subtitles of
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's language. So, the freedom that comes with
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 development is making
people
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 feel that language is no longer a barrier and that they do not need to hire somebody who can translate for them.
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, these advantages are not limited to televisions only. They can be seen everywhere,
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 as at airports, bus stops, and taxi stations. With the click of a button on the phone,
one
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 is ready to exchange
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's ideas easily. Purchasing a mobile phone is not as expensive as it used to be.
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, it is not only convenient but
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 a cheaper medium to translate with other merits.
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, they can entertain themselves and study at a reasonable price. In view of all these pros,
people
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 have the belief that there is no necessity for an interpreter. In conclusion, I reiterate my opinion that it is a blessing to have
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 a mode of translation, which comes with other tremendous opportunities. In today's society, it is a waste of money to recruit somebody just for the sake of communication, and
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 why
people
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 prefer to buy a smartphone rather than
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 somebody that comes with other hidden expenses.

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task achievement
Try to provide clearer arguments to strengthen your position. Ensure that each paragraph presents a distinct reason for your viewpoint and supports it with specific examples.
coherence cohesion
Enhance the logical structure by ensuring smooth transitions between ideas. Use more linking words and phrases to guide the reader through your argument.
coherence cohesion
While the essay is generally cohesive, aim to connect your points more explicitly back to the main argument to increase coherence.
coherence cohesion
The introduction and conclusion are clear, helping to frame the essay well.
task achievement
The essay addresses the main topic and presents a clear opinion, maintaining that human translators and interpreters are still necessary.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • automatic language translation
  • human translators
  • interpreters
  • cultural context
  • nuanced
  • linguistic subtleties
  • misunderstandings
  • real-time adaptation
  • over-dependence
  • language learning
  • precision
  • confidentiality
  • professional fields
  • legal translation
  • medical translation
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