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People today spend less and less time interacting with other people in their neighborhood and this has a negative impact on community. What are the causes and solutions? nb

#people #time #neighborhood #impact #community #nb
Nowadays
people
 spend a little bit
time
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of time
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to communicate
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communicating
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 with other
people
 in their street and it
gives
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has
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negative
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a negative
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 effect on
community
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the community
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. The main problem
this
cause
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causes
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 is destroying
relationship
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relationships
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 between
people
 and the most common solution is to spend a lot of
time
 with
neighbors
. These days a lot of
neighbors
 do not interact with each other, because
people
 do not have free
time
. Maybe they work in a difficult job or they do not want to chat with
neighbors
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neighbours
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.
However
, if they do not communicate with other
people
 from their street, it
cause
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causes
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 destroying
relationship
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relationships
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 between them.
For example
, from my
experience
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experience,
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i
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I
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leaved
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lived
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 in
the
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a
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 street
which
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called Nazarbayev and
i
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I
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 had
neighbors
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neighbours
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. But
i
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I
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 do not know him, because
i
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I
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 have never
interact
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interacted
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 with them.
Then
i
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I
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 had
problem
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a problem
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 in my house and
i
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I
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 needed help, but
i
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I
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 did not
knew
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know
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 anyone who lived near me.
Thats
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That's
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 why we should communicate with
neighbors
. Today
people
 spend less
time
 interacting with
neighbors
,
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apply
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 because they do not meet
in
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apply
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a parties or they are not close to each other. But it has
solution
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a solution
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 , like to spend more
time
 with
people
 who
lives
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live
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 near to you.
For instance
, they should meet
in
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at
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 parties or sombodies birthday.
Otherwise
, they should visit each
others
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other's
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 houses. In conclusion, we should spend our free
time
 with our
neighbors
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neighbours
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 who
lives
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live
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 near to us, because it is more useful and you can
find
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make
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a new friends
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new friends
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. If
i
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I
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 were to express my opinion, all of
this
 would be correct.
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task achievement
Try to expand on the causes of reduced interaction and the solutions you suggest. Adding more specific and diverse examples will strengthen your argument.
coherence cohesion
Organize ideas into distinct paragraphs for each point. Ensure a logical progression of ideas to enhance flow.
task achievement
Ensure each point is fully explained and supported with clear reasoning or evidence.
task achievement
The essay successfully identifies both a cause (lack of time) and a solution (spending more time with neighbors) for reduced neighborhood interaction.
coherence cohesion
The presence of clear introduction and conclusion provides a good frame for your discussion.

Your opinion

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Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

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