Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays,living in a foreign nation has become very common and popular but some folks believe that it causes many both serious problems and practical problems.certainly agree with
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essay, I will support my idea with some examples. On the one hand,first and foremost,many public to have a comfortable life decide to immigrate abroad,
hence
,they don't use their mother tongue and they start to learn a foreign language,
additionally
,speaking a new language , particularly for daily interactions,has never been challenging.it can create a miscommunication with native individuals and it would be hard to find a friend because they will avoid to a conversation if they don't understand it.
for instance
:in daily activities
such
as purchasing food when you ask for some item to be bought,the seller will hardly grasp and understand their orders.
consequently
:the sellers often become annoyed and enraged because they need to spend more time on services to customers.
On the other hand
,in the contemporary, experiencing life in a foreign state has more benefits than disadvantages because they not only try a new speech
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but
also
as a chance to visit a new culture,history and tradition.
For example
:the researchers study about a group of people who learn more than two languge addict to visit many historical places and get familiar with tradions in related a group of people who don't like to learn a foreign languge.
moreover
,the brains understand faster than other individuals ,
for example
:the students who go to another country to study at university or work at a company a higher intelligence rather than other people .
As a result
, sometimes living in countries with different cultures and speech has more cons than pros. In conclusion :
although
,living in a foreign country has complicated social and practical problems but you can mange these difficulties and enjoy our life with the best occupation and high education oppporunities .
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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