The graph shows dats about the annual earnings of three bakeries in Calgary

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illustrates the information about the annual

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of

Amandine

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Bakery

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,

Mari

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Bakershop and

Bolo

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Cakery

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in Calgary between 2000 and 2010.

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it is noticeable that the

earning

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of

Amandine

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Bakery

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was

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the highest,

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the

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of

Bolo

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Cakery

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was the lowest between 2000 and 2010.

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, the yearly

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of

Mari

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Bakeshop was only

bakery

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which

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significantly decreased over 10 years; meanwhile,

Amandine

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Bakery

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and

Bolo

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Cakery

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have increased. As can be seen,

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the beginning of the

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, the annual

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of

Mari

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Bakeshop was the highest , almost 80,000

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,

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the yearly earnings of

Amandine

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Bakery

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was

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a little bit below 60,000

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.

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the same period, the lowest

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is accounted

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Bolo

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Cakery

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, at 20,000

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. As the

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shows, from 2005 to 2010, the earnings of

Mari

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Bakeshop fell from a little bit above 60000

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to around 40,000

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.

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, in the second half of the

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the line of

Amandine

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Bakery

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skyrocketed from

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approximately

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60,000

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to 100,000

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.