Your best friend just had her first baby. You are currently overseas but will be returning to your hometown in a week. Write to your friend. In your letter, Congratulate your friend. Tell her when you will be returning home. Ask when you could drop in to meet her and the baby.

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Dear Naina, I hope you and your

baby

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are doing well. I was very glad to hear that you

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were blassed

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blassed

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blessed

with a

baby

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boy. I am writing

this

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to let you know that I am coming back in a week. So, we can

arange

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arrange

get-together

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a get-together

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accordingly

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Firstly

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, I wish you and your family many

congratultions

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congratulations

for

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the

baby

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boy. I am very excited to see him.

Unfortunatley

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Unfortunately

, I was not there during your precious moment but I will meet you soon.

Besides

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this

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, I would like to tell you that I will be there on Sunday

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apply

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28th December. And I am planning to buy some clothes for your child. So, I need your help to

chooseing

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choosing

choose

the best one. If you could tell me what kind of

wearing

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clothing

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you would like for your

baby

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, it

will

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would

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be great.

Lastly

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, I will come to your home on the same day in the evening around 6:00 o'clock. Please let me

now

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know

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if you

free

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are free

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at that time. I look forward to

see

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seeing

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you soon. Yours lovingly,

Dimpee

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Dimple

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coherence

Try to proofread the letter for minor spelling and grammatical errors to improve clarity.

cohesion

Make sure to separate different points clearly in paragraphs for better organization.

tone

The letter maintains a friendly and warm tone appropriate for writing to a close friend.

structure

The greeting and closing are appropriately used, enhancing the structure of the letter.

5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

176 words

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