The graph below shows the changes in the maximum number of Asian elephants between 1997 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The bar graph illustrates the
number
of annual visitors
, in millions, to three museums - the MET in New York, the Edo in Tokyo, and The National Museum
in China- over a 6-year of
period, starting from 2000.
Change preposition
apply
Overall
, what stands out from the chart is that the national museum
experienced an upward trend. Additionally
, the MET museum
saw an increase in the number
of visitors
with a fluctuation whereas
the Edo museum
in China witnessed a reduction of their annual visitors
at the end
of time
span.
In 2000, the Correct article usage
the time
national
Correct your spelling
National Museum
museum
in USA, New York had the lowest number
of sightseers, which was just above 6 million
, and then
there was a gradual rise to 11 million
in 2003, remained
stable in the following year. Correct word choice
and remained
Then
, it experienced a sharp increase by
4 Change preposition
of
million
from 11 million
to 15 million
in 2005, which was highest
throughout the period.
Regarding the MET in New York, it started at 12 Correct article usage
the highest
million
in 2000, witnessing a sharp decline to 6 million
in 2001, and remained stable in the next year before a rapid increase to just above 14 million
. However
, Edo museum
in Japan saw a downward trend starting at around 13 Fix the agreement mistake
museums
million
in 2000, remaining stable in 2001, and dropping to around 9 million
in 2002. Furthermore
, the figure increased to 10 million
in 2005, which was lowest
Change the article
the lowest
number
of visitors
among these three museums in 2005.Submitted by jisan.path1506605 on
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