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The graph below shows the changes in the maximum number of Asian elephants between 1997 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the changes in the maximum number of Asian elephants between 1997 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph illustrates the
number
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 of annual
visitors
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, in millions, to three museums - the MET in New York, the Edo in Tokyo, and The National
Museum
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 in China- over a 6-year
of
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period, starting from 2000.
Overall
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, what stands out from the chart is that the national
museum
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 experienced an upward trend.
Additionally
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, the MET
museum
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 saw an increase in the
number
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 of
visitors
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 with a fluctuation
whereas
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 the Edo
museum
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 in China witnessed a reduction of their annual
visitors
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at the end
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 of
time
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the time
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 span. In 2000, the
national
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National Museum
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museum
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 in USA, New York had the lowest
number
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 of sightseers, which was just above 6
million
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, and
then
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 there was a gradual rise to 11
million
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 in 2003,
remained
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and remained
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 stable in the following year.
Then
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, it experienced a sharp increase
by
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of
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 4
million
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 from 11
million
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 to 15
million
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 in 2005, which was
highest
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the highest
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 throughout the period. Regarding the MET in New York, it started at 12
million
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 in 2000, witnessing a sharp decline to 6
million
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 in 2001, and remained stable in the next year before a rapid increase to just above 14
million
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.
However
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, Edo
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museum
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museums
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 in Japan saw a downward trend starting at around 13
million
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 in 2000, remaining stable in 2001, and dropping to around 9
million
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 in 2002.
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, the figure increased to 10
million
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 in 2005, which was
lowest
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the lowest
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number
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 of
visitors
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 among these three museums in 2005.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, visitors, museum, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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