The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The line graph represents the total
number
of people visiting a
Caribbean
Island
and the total of tourists that were staying on the
island
and
cruise
ships
from 2010 to 2017. In 2010, there were only 1
million
visitors
that visited the
Caribbean
Island
, and a quarter of them were staying on a
cruise
ship,
while
the rest of them were staying on the
island
. Two years later, the
overall
number
of tourists had gradually increased. The
number
of people staying on the
island
was rising, which was 1.25
million
, yet, there was a decrease in
visitors
staying on
cruise
ships
, which was a quarter of them.
Nonetheless
, in 2016, the total
number
of
visitors
had reached 2.7
million
. Surprisingly, the
number
of them staying on
cruise
ships
overcame the ones that were staying on the
island
. In 2017, 3.5
million
tourists came to the
Caribbean
Island
, 2
million
of them were staying on
cruise
ships
,
while
1.5
million
of them were staying on the
island
.
To sum up
, the particular
Caribbean
Island
's
visitors
had been rising steadily over the years. At
first,
people preferred to stay on the
island
,
however
, in 2016, there was a shift, where they liked to stay on a
cruise
ship.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, caribbean, island, cruise, ships, million, visitors with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 2 times.
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