The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The line graph represents the total
number
of people visiting a Use synonyms
Caribbean
Use synonyms
Island
and the total of tourists that were staying on the Use synonyms
island
and Use synonyms
cruise
Use synonyms
ships
from 2010 to 2017.
In 2010, there were only 1 Use synonyms
million
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visitors
that visited the Use synonyms
Caribbean
Use synonyms
Island
, and a quarter of them were staying on a Use synonyms
cruise
ship, Use synonyms
while
the rest of them were staying on the Linking Words
island
. Two years later, the Use synonyms
overall
Linking Words
number
of tourists had gradually increased. The Use synonyms
number
of people staying on the Use synonyms
island
was rising, which was 1.25 Use synonyms
million
, yet, there was a decrease in Use synonyms
visitors
staying on Use synonyms
cruise
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ships
, which was a quarter of them.
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Nonetheless
, in 2016, the total Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
had reached 2.7 Use synonyms
million
. Surprisingly, the Use synonyms
number
of them staying on Use synonyms
cruise
Use synonyms
ships
overcame the ones that were staying on the Use synonyms
island
. In 2017, 3.5 Use synonyms
million
tourists came to the Use synonyms
Caribbean
Use synonyms
Island
, 2 Use synonyms
million
of them were staying on Use synonyms
cruise
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ships
, Use synonyms
while
1.5 Linking Words
million
of them were staying on the Use synonyms
island
.
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To sum up
, the particular Linking Words
Caribbean
Use synonyms
Island
's Use synonyms
visitors
had been rising steadily over the years. At Use synonyms
first,
people preferred to stay on the Linking Words
island
, Use synonyms
however
, in 2016, there was a shift, where they liked to stay on a Linking Words
cruise
ship.Use synonyms
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, caribbean, island, cruise, ships, million, visitors with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 2 times.
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