The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The line graph represents the total
number
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of people visiting a
Caribbean
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Island
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and the total of tourists that were staying on the
island
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and
cruise
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ships
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from 2010 to 2017. In 2010, there were only 1
million
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visitors
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that visited the
Caribbean
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Island
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, and a quarter of them were staying on a
cruise
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ship,
while
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the rest of them were staying on the
island
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. Two years later, the
overall
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number
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of tourists had gradually increased. The
number
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of people staying on the
island
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was rising, which was 1.25
million
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, yet, there was a decrease in
visitors
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staying on
cruise
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ships
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, which was a quarter of them.
Nonetheless
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, in 2016, the total
number
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of
visitors
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had reached 2.7
million
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. Surprisingly, the
number
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of them staying on
cruise
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ships
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overcame the ones that were staying on the
island
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. In 2017, 3.5
million
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tourists came to the
Caribbean
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Island
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, 2
million
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of them were staying on
cruise
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ships
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,
while
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1.5
million
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of them were staying on the
island
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.
To sum up
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, the particular
Caribbean
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Island
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's
visitors
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had been rising steadily over the years. At
first,
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people preferred to stay on the
island
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,
however
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, in 2016, there was a shift, where they liked to stay on a
cruise
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ship.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, caribbean, island, cruise, ships, million, visitors with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 2 times.
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