Write a letter to your neighbor (who is also your friend) about the damage that occurs to your car while he parks his car in the space allotted to you. In the letter, you should: Describe the damage Say how you feel about this problem. Suggest on actions he should take.

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Dear Mr Ramesh, I hope

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letter finds you well. I am writing

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letter to let you know that yesterday you damaged my car

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parking your vehicle at its designated place in the night. The passenger side front door is badly damaged and it has a number of scratches and dents on it.

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got to know about it

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when I cleaned my vehicle

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morning. First of all, I was deeply saddened and anguish after witnessing the scene, because I have always tried to keep my car safe from

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incidents. I am very hurt

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because I bought

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car

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month only.

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, I do not like to drive

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vehicles. I would highly appreciate it if you could pay for the repair work

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because

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episode has happened

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your negligence. I hope you will look into the matter and I am willing to discuss the whole event with you

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. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Jatinder.

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Task Achievement

You have addressed all the parts of the task competently. Your description of the damage is clear and your feelings are expressed well. To achieve a higher score, you could include more specific details about the extent of the damage, such as the cost or the inconvenience it causes you.

Coherence and Cohesion

The letter is well-organized, with a clear logical structure. Each paragraph focuses on a single idea, making it easy for the reader to follow your points. To enhance coherence, you may consider using linking words or phrases to guide the reader further.

Task Achievement

Your use of a friendly yet firm tone is appropriate for the context, considering your relationship with the neighbor.

Coherence and Cohesion

The letter has a very clear opening and closing, effectively demonstrating coherence and cohesion.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

168 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

allocating
allotted space
damage
dents
scratches
repairs
responsibility
compensation
convenience
inconvenience
empathy
respect
resolve
mutual understanding
precautionary measures

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