The graph below shows the spending on research into renewable sources of energy in four countries between 1975 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart provides key information about the
population
size
, birth
rate
and death
rate
. The units are measured in millions. Overall
, it is clear from the graph the fact that population
size
had a significant increase from 1800 to year 2000. In addition
, in 1900 the birth
rate
and population
size
were the same rate
whereas
, in 1950 the population
size
showed a considerable increase and the birth
size
dropped from 30 to less than 25. According to
what is shown, in 1700, the birth
rate
had the highest rate
30 million and the death
rate
was between population
size
and birth
rate
less than 30 and bigger than 10 in 1750 population
size
increased and the birth
and death
rates remained. In terms, in 1900 the highest rate
was a population
size
bigger than 40 million and the smallest rate
was in the death
rate
and the birth
rate
started to decrease, in 1950 population
size
and the birth
rate
increasedSubmitted by mona11omar33 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, size, birth, rate, death with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
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