Some people believe that governments should have access to people’s mobile phone call records and messages for safety reasons. Others believe that this information is private and should not be available without permission. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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It is thought that personal
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like phone call records and messages should be shared with
governments
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due to
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safety.
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, some people think that personal
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ought to remain private if
governments
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do not have
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. I agree with the latter opinion, but I think that
governments
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should have
permissions
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permission
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in some cases. On one hand, giving
governments
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access
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to people's private
information
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is surely the fastest and simplest way to prevent harmful activities.
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, the police should be more effective
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preventing online bullying or criminal activities.
However
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, sharing these types of
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with the police or the
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can be considered
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a violation of the right
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freedome
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freedom
that everyone has. No one can be sure that
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this information
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information
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will not be used by
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government
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in an unconstitutional way.
Moreover
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, nowadays hackers are able to steal online
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, and
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government
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the government
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cannot ensure their safety.
On the other hand
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, someone
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that
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the goverment
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goverment
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government
should not have
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access
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without permission. Personally, I agree with
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point of view. In my opinion, mobile phone call records, messages, and any other kind of online personal
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ought to be available to
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government
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the government
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only in certain situations.
For instance
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, the police might need
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to some
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while
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investigating a case in order to prevent
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danger or simply solve the case, and I think that in
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situations they must have permission. In conclusion, I disagree with those who say that
governments
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should always have
access
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to people's private
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becuase
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because
I consider that unethical.
Instead
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, I think that
access
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should be given
them
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to them
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only in case of real need.
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