The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011, and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011, and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.
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The bar graph compares the
number
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of United States houses by their yearly pay during the years, 2007, 2011 and 2015. As reflected by the y axis the
number
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of households is measured in millions.
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, it can be seen that there was a general upward trend in the
number
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of families in the given periods, albeit to varying degrees. In the years, 2007 and 2015, there was the most
number
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of homes which had annual pays of $100,000 and above, stood at just under 30
million
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and nearly 34
million
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families, respectively.
However
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, the figures decreased to 28
million
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in 2011.
On the other hand
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,
the
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in the
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two categories of
incomes
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income
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which are between $50,000 to $74,999 dollars
to
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apply
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99,999 dollars, the digits of homes are relatively stable in the given time periods, standing at approximately 20
million
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for the former and close to 15
million
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for the latter.
Further
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, the figures
of
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for
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houses
is
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from 25
million
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to 30
million
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for
the
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yearly pay of less than 25,000 dollars.
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, the annual income of quarter to nearly half, the
number
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of households is about 25
million
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to just under 30
million
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • annual income
  • income bracket
  • distribution
  • proportion
  • household
  • economy
  • economic recession
  • income inequality
  • income distribution
  • wealth
  • increase/decrease
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • noticeable
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