The diagram below illustrates the carbon cycle in nature
The diagram illustrates the various stages of the
carbon
cycle.Use synonyms
This
report provides a brief overview of the key stages involved.
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Initially
, solar energy is converted into organic Linking Words
carbon
through photosynthesis in Use synonyms
plants
. When Use synonyms
plants
and animals die and decompose, Use synonyms
this
organic Linking Words
carbon
is transferred to the soil. A portion of it remains underground as fossils and fossil fuels.
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Carbon
is Use synonyms
also
returned to the atmosphere through various processes, including respiration by Linking Words
plants
and animals, Use synonyms
as well as
human activities Linking Words
such
as burning fossil fuels in cars and factories. Linking Words
This
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carbon
is released as CO2 into the air, where it is reabsorbed by Use synonyms
plants
, Use synonyms
thus
perpetuating the cycle.Linking Words
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