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Writer letter to get a work experience certificate from company employer

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Dear Sir, I am writing formally to request a work experience certificate from your esteemed organization. I contributed as a Data Analyst from November 2020 to December 2024. During my time
in
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 “Zudio Softwares,” I had
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 privilege to work on numerous projects including
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 with multinational companies about designing of latest marketing strategies that
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enhance
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 the customers by 20%
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past
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 3 years.
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, I received several rewards that reflect my great commitment and dedication towards the work.
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, I decided to pursue my
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 in Data handling from
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 University of Toronto, Ontario from
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 Winter intake. I need an employment letter that demonstrates my key responsibilities like managing data, creating codes for various languages and other respondent duties.
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 is a mandatory document for the application process. I kindly request you
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provide
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 job certification at your earliest convenience as I have a tight deadline of December 12, 2024, before midnight. I would really appreciate your assistance towards my entire journey with your company. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Sarab
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task achievement
Ensure consistency in date references for clarity (2024 should be 2023, as you refer to the future).
coherence cohesion
Clearly outline specific achievements or metrics in separate sentences or bullet points if needed for better clarity.
coherence cohesion
The letter is structured well with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion.
task achievement
The tone is polite and formal, suitable for a letter to an employer.
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The request and reasons for the letter are clearly stated.
coherence cohesion
The letter closes respectfully with a proper closing statement.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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