The bar charts below shows the prevalence of obesity among boys and girls aged 12 to 19 by ethnicity, in the United States for the years 2004 and 2014.
The bar charts illustrate the percentages of obesity among American boys and girls aged 12 to 19 by ethnicity in the years 2004 and 2014, broken down into three categories:
non-
Hispanic
-white, non-
Hispanic
black, and Hispanic
.
Overall
, it is evident that the number
of obese young people increased in 2014 for both genders. Except for the non-hispanichispanic
black group, Correct your spelling
non-Hispanic Hispanic
males
had more prevalence for over-wight than females in other groups. Nevertheless
, Hispanic
males
and non-
Hispanic
black women had the biggest growth in 2014.
To begin
with, the prevalence of obesity in all the male groups started at relatively less than 15%; however
, this
increased significantly in 2014. The Hispanic
males
had the wildest fluctuations, with a massive jump to 27%, the highest percentage in any other male group; whereas
, the non-Hispanichispanic white category had the smallest rise, at around 17% in 2014. Eventually, the non-Hispanichispanic black males
escalated to 20%.
Meanwhile, the number
of non-
Hispanic
black females who were obese had the highest number
in both 2004 and 2014, it rose from 16% to 29%, the biggest number
in any other category. The other female groups showed a slight increase, the non-
Hispanic
white went from 9% to 14%, and the Hispanic
increased from 12% to 17%.Submitted by zuhrakhirie1997 on
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