The maps illustrate an industrial area in Norbiton in the present day compared with plans for future development of the site.
The current maps illustrate a particular industrial area of Norbiton and how it is planned to be developed in the future.
At
the
first glance, it is comprehended that the site will turn Correct article usage
apply
to
a more residential area and significantly Change preposition
into
flourished
Wrong verb form
flourish
by
more facilities Change preposition
with
such
as medical and educational centers
. Change the spelling
centres
Furthermore
, some green farmlands will be replaced by new road
constructions.
On the eastern side of the map
, the factories among both sides of the east road
will be converted to
housing areas Change preposition
into
along with
a spacious playground and a school at the end
of the road
. Also
, beside
various Replace the word
besides
habitants
, several shops and a medical Correct your spelling
habitats
center
will be built around the central main square.
On the top of the Change the spelling
centre
map
, a few farmlands will be demolished to return to residential areas which will be interconnected to the central part of the region through a bridge over the northern river. Although
the main road
map
of the region will not considerably change, a new street will be constructed at the western side of the central square among the new housing areas along with
a new smaller square on the southern part of the map
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