The table and chart below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 on one area of Britian. The table shows where the money came from and chart show how it was distributed.
The charts and table above display the
budget
of the police in a specific area of britain
between the Change the capitalization
Britain
year
2017 and 2018, in the following paragraphs we will analyze them.
In the year 2017, the sum of Fix the agreement mistake
years
Correct determiner usage
apply
all
the Correct determiner usage
apply
budget
was 304,7 millions
almost 60% of it came from Change to singular
million
national
government and 30% came from taxes, grants and various sources. Add an article
the national
Three quarters
of the Add a hyphen
Three-quarters
budget
was used to pay salaries, and the rest served to maintien
buildings and transportation, Correct your spelling
maintain
while
only 8% was utilized to
technology.
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for
In contrast
with the
2017, the Change the article
apply
budget
increase
in the following year by 14 Replace the word
increased
millions
, with the extra money coming mainly from taxes; but the biggest contributor was still the national government. And despite the additional Change to singular
million
budget
, the salaries decreased to represent only 69% of the total expenses, in favour of allocating more funds to technology. While
the buildings and transportation kept the same range of funds.Submitted by amale.sefiani on
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