The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
These maps illustrate
road
access to a Use synonyms
city
hospital in two different years including 2007 and 2010.
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Overall
, in the period of three years, starting from 2007, the Linking Words
road
access to the hospital had many developments in terms of the bus station and car park.
In 2010 the Use synonyms
road
had some extensions, Use synonyms
two
roundabouts Correct word choice
and two
added
to the Add a missing verb
were added
road
. One of them Use synonyms
added
on the south Add a missing verb
was added
side
of Hospital Use synonyms
Use synonyms
road
where it connected to Capitalize word
Road
City
Use synonyms
Use synonyms
road
and the other one Capitalize word
Road
added
to the south Add a missing verb
was added
side
of the Use synonyms
Use synonyms
city hospital
, where the Ring Correct your spelling
City Hospital
Use synonyms
road
connected to Hospital Rd. Capitalize word
Road
Moreover
, a public car park which had not been there in 2007 Linking Words
constructed
in 2010 next to the Add a missing verb
was constructed
city
hospital on the east Use synonyms
side
.
In 2007 there Use synonyms
had been
many bus stops on Hospital Rd Wrong verb form
were
while
in 2010 they were removed and turned to a bus station on the west Linking Words
side
of the Use synonyms
road
which had access from both roundabouts. There Use synonyms
furthermore
had been a car park on the east Linking Words
side
of Hospital Rd which was designed for staff and Use synonyms
public
, Correct article usage
the public
Linking Words
However
in Add a comma
However,
2010
its use changed for only staff's usage.Add a comma
2010,
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