The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.
The line graph demonstrates the
number
of received Use synonyms
questions
by the tourist information office, from January to June 2011, in one city.
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Overall
, the Linking Words
number
of inquiries which were handed over in person was the lowest figure at the beginning, but Use synonyms
at the end
of the period, it overtook the other two figures. Linking Words
Also
, the Linking Words
questions
sent by letter or email and delivered by telephone started at almost the same Use synonyms
point
but they grew apart as time passed throughout the given period.
The Use synonyms
number
of enquiries received in person was about 400 in January, and by March, it had doubled, reaching almost 800, exceeding the Use synonyms
number
of letters and emails received. It continued to increase to a peak of approximately 1900 Use synonyms
at the end
of June.
At the starting Linking Words
point
, the Use synonyms
questions
asked by telephone had the highest Use synonyms
number
of around 900, a little higher than the Use synonyms
number
of letters and emails. It witnessed a fluctuation until March and remained steady by April at the Use synonyms
point
of 1000, the Use synonyms
number
of received letters and emails remained almost unchanged by March at about 700 and Use synonyms
then
dropped to around 400 in May and plateaued by the end of the period Linking Words
while
the Linking Words
questions
asked by telephone increased rapidly and peaked at the Use synonyms
point
of about 1600 and became the second highest.Use synonyms
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